Griff: https://griffsenglishblog.blogspot.com/2016/12/cookie-currency.html?showComment=1481850445303#c3158572650590665000
Alex: https://harambememelover.blogspot.com/2016/12/goals.html?showComment=1481850700747#c6325410764914572820
Thursday, December 15, 2016
Monday, December 12, 2016
Prompt Take 2
What would life be like as your pet?
Life as my dog would be great. I could wake up as late as I wanted every morning. There I would have a big bowl of my special food waiting for me to chow down. Then while the humans are doing whatever they do my day gets very complicated. I get to nap in a cozy chair as long as I wanted all day long. Then the human would come home for the night and the process starts all over again.
I have heard that most humans think being a dog is easy but it certainly is not. I have to spend all day protecting my house from those evil mailmen and squirrels. It is also kind of lonely as I have no other friends to play with. Then there is the matter of waiting for the humans to come home and let me outside to use the bathroom. Being a dog is hard but overall it is pretty good.
Sunday, December 11, 2016
Writing Center
The writing center was a big help to me. I went their on Friday during tutorial and was happy I did. The writing fellow helped me with many things. We worked on not giving too much information in the thesis statement and making the word choice clearer. We also worked on formatting and quotations which I knew little about.
There are still things I need to improve on in my paper though. I need to work on transitioning my paragraphs together better. I also need to improve on embedding some of the quotes. Overall the writing center was a massive help and gave me an idea on where I need to still improve my paper. I certainly plan to go their next paper.
There are still things I need to improve on in my paper though. I need to work on transitioning my paragraphs together better. I also need to improve on embedding some of the quotes. Overall the writing center was a massive help and gave me an idea on where I need to still improve my paper. I certainly plan to go their next paper.
Prompt
Who is one person or a group of people that have inspired you to be who you have been today?
There have been many people that have inspired me to be who I am today. Probably the most influential have been all of my coaches. Just about all of them have inspired me in some way. I have been through many teams throughout my life and coaches have made me into who I am today.
I have been very fortunate during my life. Every coach I've had has always demanded my best every single day. They would push me mentally as well as physically. As a basketball player we would spend hours in the gym working on my shot. My coaches have made me become who I am today by turning me into who I am today by making me a better person as well as a harder worker.
There have been many people that have inspired me to be who I am today. Probably the most influential have been all of my coaches. Just about all of them have inspired me in some way. I have been through many teams throughout my life and coaches have made me into who I am today.
I have been very fortunate during my life. Every coach I've had has always demanded my best every single day. They would push me mentally as well as physically. As a basketball player we would spend hours in the gym working on my shot. My coaches have made me become who I am today by turning me into who I am today by making me a better person as well as a harder worker.
Thursday, December 8, 2016
Sunday, December 4, 2016
Free Post- Christmas
Christmas is definitely my favorite time of year. Everyone is always happy and smiling. Even exams don't stress me out because I know Christmas is almost here. It is also great to give presents and make people feel good. I also love the cold and snow that happens during christmas time, except in Louisiana.
Finally to my two favorite parts food and football. The college football bowl games are on during the whole season. I usually spend most of my time relaxing and watching football. Then finally the best part, food. There is always plenty of candy at my house so I am always full.
Finally to my two favorite parts food and football. The college football bowl games are on during the whole season. I usually spend most of my time relaxing and watching football. Then finally the best part, food. There is always plenty of candy at my house so I am always full.
Literary Analysis process
Currently I am still trying to turn my outline into a rough draft. The hardest part has been to make the draft not too repetitive. The looking closely and how it supports my thesis sections often end up sounding similar. I will need to put more work into making both of those clearer. I also have to find the perfect order of my sequence so it makes sense to the essay reader.
Dr.D really helped me on this paper. She made sure I had all the required parts and gave me some helpful comments to clarify things. I really ended up struggling for the length of my paper as I probably did not have enough details. I'll just say I got I had to do some stretching to get three pages. Hopefully my paper is not too bad.
Dr.D really helped me on this paper. She made sure I had all the required parts and gave me some helpful comments to clarify things. I really ended up struggling for the length of my paper as I probably did not have enough details. I'll just say I got I had to do some stretching to get three pages. Hopefully my paper is not too bad.
Thursday, December 1, 2016
Blog Comments 12-1-16
James:
https://jamescblogpost.blogspot.com/2016/11/symbolism.html?showComment=1480601683906#c8776674864427373877
Griff: https://griffsenglishblog.blogspot.com/2016/11/how-to-make-christmas-breakfast.html?showComment=1480602169463#c462018798741772084
https://jamescblogpost.blogspot.com/2016/11/symbolism.html?showComment=1480601683906#c8776674864427373877
Griff: https://griffsenglishblog.blogspot.com/2016/11/how-to-make-christmas-breakfast.html?showComment=1480602169463#c462018798741772084
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